An astounding feat!
Pushing the limits of the human body and ingenuity!
Bunkum wins all the Nobel Prizes and Olympic medals!
An astounding feat!
Pushing the limits of the human body and ingenuity!
Bunkum wins all the Nobel Prizes and Olympic medals!
EXT. OCEAN FLOOR JUST OUTSIDE ATLANTIS – NIGHT
Cold open on HARRY and PIERCE (two members of VAMP SQUAD SIX) fighting an AGENT OF S.T.A.K.E. They have black eyes. (NOTE: Their eyes are black like a shark’s when they are in full vampire battle mode.)
After some struggle, the Agent of S.T.A.K.E. kicks Harry. Harry floats out of the fight. He falls and his eyes turn from black to blue and dreamy. He watches the rest of the fight, frightened.
Pierce overpowers the AGENT and holds him in a headlock. Pierce pulls off his GLOVE, revealing a LEECH-LIKE MOUTH on his palm. Pierce puts his hand on the agent and drinks his blood.
Pierce swims away, leaving the AGENT’S BODY to float slowly down. A cloud of BLOOD floats out of the body. Pierce speaks as he swims past Harry.
Go on. Get yours, Harry. I left you some.
Harry swims over to the BODY dejectedly. He removes his GLOVE and drinks blood with it as Pierce did.
INT. DRACADEMY HALLS – LATER
HARRY puts a notebook in his LOCKER. PIERCE quickly swims up to him and slams the LOCKER.
What exactly was that back there?
I…I froze. It won’t happen again.
It’d better not. If you’re gonna be one of the Vamp Squad
Six, then you need to step it up. If you can’t support your
fellow agents, we’ll gift wrap you and send you over to
Hey, I know what you’re going through. If Colonel Draquala
hadn’t sent Sanguina into the field, she’d still be alive. I
mean, she was your girlfriend, bro.
Pierce’s watch flashes. He looks at it.
Speak of the devil. I’ve got to see Draquala now.
Pierce exits. Harry lingers at the lockers.
EXT. DRACADEMY DORMITORY – EVENING
Flashback to SANGUINA and HARRY in front of the Dracademy dorm.
It’s okay, Harry. It’s an in-and-out rescue mission.
I’ll be back and debriefed in a couple of hours.
I don’t know, Sanguina. I’ve got a bad feeling about this one.
You worry too much, tiger shark.
She kisses him.
I guess that’s why I like ya.
INT. DRACADEMY HALLS
Cut back to HARRY reflecting. (NOTE: Not literally! They can’t cast reflections.) Harry sets his jaw and pulls out his PHONE. He types something we can’t see.
Cut to a shot of the phone screen. We see a TEXT MESSAGE to DIRK that says “Tonight’s the night. Draquala’s going down!”
Cut back to Harry. His eyes turn black. (NOTE: Their eyes are black like a shark’s when they are in full vampire battle mode.)
END ACT 1
~ Ten Months Later ~
Some people find religion behind bars. Some see the error of their ways and vow to reform. Some are made more violent. The Redressers had been awaiting trial in jail for fifteen months and Carl had a sudden burst of insight.
“Man, jail sucks!”
Mia, Kathryn, and Frankenstein glanced at him and settled back into their own interior monologues, which were immediately interrupted by Carl again.
“Seriously! This place is the worst.”
“Prison is worse,” Mia said. “When we’re found guilty and sent there, this is gonna seem like a vacation. From what I hear, the gangs are a lot more dangerous.”
“The lockup gangs may not be violent,” Frankenstein said, “but they’re so incredibly irritating! They’re either having episodes because they stopped taking their meds or they’re just sloppy drunks.”
Kathryn rolled over on her bed, threw up, and fell over the side into the vomit. She sat up, barely noticing the filth. “D’you say drunks? ‘Sthe Toilet Winos comin’? Those guys’re great.” She fell sideways, back into the land of blacked out slumber.
“She’s gotten worse,” Carl said. “She swears she’s just investigating the Toilet Winos undercover, but jeez.”
Mia sighed. “This wasn’t the plan. We were supposed to network with the minor league gangs here to get intel on the guards so we could expose the institutional abuse. We may be stuck waiting for our trial, but we can do some good in the meantime. But our spokeswoman is just–” Kathryn farted in her sleep. “Yeah.”
“I still think one of us could do it,” Frankenstein said.
“Oh, come on. The public won’t take the charges seriously coming from a Latina, let alone a blue guy or a corpse quilt, no offense. We need a white lady, and ours has John Bonhamed out.”
“In her defense,” Carl said, “have you tried the toilet wine? It’s only kind of terrible.”
“Our trial starts soon,” Mia said. “We’re running out of time. We need a plan.”
~ ~ ~
“All rise,” announced the bailiff. “The honorable Judge Natliss Yebajuge presiding.”
“Be seated,” the judge said. “I’ve got a fundraising dinner to get to, so let’s try to hurry this along, okay? Prosecution, start your engines.”
“Thank you, your honor,” said District Attorney Gary Dean Stanton, no relation. “Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, we have here a pretty straightforward case of four people wrecking a store so the owner could file a false insurance claim and walk away a rich man, and then attempting to break the owner out of jail, causing quite a lot of public property damage and getting caught red-handed in the act. Okay, so it’s not that straightforward, but it is a solid case. We have security camera footage and sworn testimony from the jail personnel, as well as the testimony of the owner, who was more than happy to rat out his friends in order to cop a plea bargain.”
“What?!?,” Frankenstein cried, slamming his massive hands on the table.
The judge banged the gavel again. “I’ll have order! Go on, Mr. District Attorney.”
It didn’t get much better after that.
~ ~ ~
That evening, they were put back in their cell. Mia started off the panicking session. “This sucks so bad! I can’t believe I stuck with you idiots! Now I’m gonna go to prison and my career is toast, not that it ever started off to begin with, and I’m gonna end up in some stupid gang explaining to everyone how tasers work or something. Ugh! I hate all of you!”
After a moment of awkward silence, Carl spoke up. “Heh, isn’t it weird that they put us all in one cell? They didn’t even separate the men and women.”
The others stared at him.
“It’s just weird. Heh.”
“L’you plizz step tlkng?” Kathryn felt like a steamroller was crushing her head and all of the gloppy chunks were splattering into her bowels. “‘M ne’er drinkin’ toilet wine ag’n. Mean it dis time.”
“Shall we attempt an escape?” Frankenstein offered. “I bet if we put out heads together we could figure out a good plan.”
“I appreciate the thought, Frankenstein,” Mia said, “but I wouldn’t suggest putting people’s body parts together if I were you. Just saying.”
The Redressers looked at each other.
They raced to the window, which took like a quarter of a second because it’s a jail cell. Outside, they could barely make out a figure waving in the dark.
“Guys,” the figure said in a stage whisper. “It’s me, Dwayne! Where are you?”
“Over here!” called Carl.
Dwayne ran up to the window and pressed his face to the bars. “You’re all clear, kid! Now let’s blow this thing and go home!” He waited for a reaction. It didn’t come. “Get it? Like Han? It doesn’t matter. Just stand back, okay?”
Dwayne took a few steps back and pulled a small bomb out of his jacket pocket. He hurled it at the jail cell and it exploded in flames. The flames began to spread across the cheap paint that the jail was coated in, but the actual bricks weren’t harmed.
“Huh,” Dwayne said. He scratched his head. “Any ideas?”
Frankenstein pushed on the wall. It collapsed outwards, creating a giant hole. The others stared at him, mouths agape.
“What? We needed a hole. Come on.”
The alarms blared as they ran out of the cell and into the open air. Dwayne was watching the fire spread over the jail. It was getting near the government center now.
“Should we tell someone?” Dwayne asked.
“Sorry,” Mia said. “I left my phone in the evidence locker.”
They ran a few blocks before taking a rest. Mia stuck her pointer finger in Frankenstein’s face.
“You could have done that at any time?”
“Why didn’t…I’m so…This team sucks so bad!”
Kathryn knelt down and threw up. “Ohhhhh, tha’s better.” She spat and stood up on her wobbly legs. “Okay, lez go.”
They ran off into the night. They stopped six times to convince Kathryn that running away was still a better idea than taking a nap at a bus stop.
When they arrived at Dwayne’s one-bedroom apartment, they got to work planning their next steps.
“So what, we’re outlaw vigilantes now?” Carl asked.
“I guess so,” Dwayne said.
Mia put her head in her hands. “All I had to do was serve coffee and apply for jobs.”
Mia, Carl, Frankenstein, and the monkey that they kept around despite her not, in fact, being the fabled Monkey King Sun Wukong gathered in the parking lot of the Big City 2386th Street jail. “Where’s Kathryn?” asked Carl.
With the impeccable timing of a fictional story, Kathryn approached the team at that exact moment! Isn’t that exciting? What are the odds? I mean, seriously. If you factor in the timing of the traffic sig– Hmm? Oh. Right. Sorry.
Kathryn approached the team. She was embarrassed and then immediately furious. “Why didn’t anyone tell me we weren’t doing this in uniform? You know I hate my boobs flopping out of this stupid thing.”
“Okay,” Mia said. “We all know the plan, right? Kathryn, you go in and distract the guards with your, um, yeah. After they’re nice and drooly, the lights will go out and you take the keys. Then we come in as backup and keep them occupied while you free Dwayne. ”
“For the record, this plan sucks,” Carl said.
“I know, but you all lied about having powers so it’s this or no team. Got it, everyone?”
They all said “Yeah” in unison like some stupid 80s Saturday morning cartoon. They might as well have put their hands in the middle and said, “Go Redressers!” Yeesh.
Kathryn made her way to the entrance and Carl crouched down next to the monkey. “Okay, Sun Wukong, listen closely. I’m going to pick you up and put you in that air duct over there. Your job is to get to the security desk and– Hey! Hey, come back!”
Since it was the first time she had been outside in weeks, the monkey they insisted on calling Sun Wukong saw an opportunity to escape and took it. She scampered off at top speed for over half a mile before crawling into a cardboard box and taking a nap. Later that night she would wander behind a grocery store and find a dumpster full of delicious produce that was mostly edible. It was the first night of the rest of her happy, fulfilling life. Bye, little monkey! Good luck! I love you!
Carl watched her run away. “Crap. Uhhhh, okay, plan B. Mia, you’re an engineer, right? Can you disable the security system?”
“Oh yeah, of course,” Mia said. “I’m sure you have the manufacturer, the model, and all the specs of this building handy, right? No? You don’t? That’s okay, because I can just ‘hack’ it like in movies, right? Let me get out my laptop and password-cracking software and I’ll get us in, right? Idiot.”
Mia let out an exasperated sigh and thought for a moment. “Vic, come with me.”
“What do I do?” asked Carl.
“Stick with the plan. When the lights go out, go in and help Kathryn. We’ll be right behind you.”
Mia and Frankenstein walked around the building until they found the building’s power supply. A transformer sat behind a locked chain link fence.
“Okay, Vic. We need to get in and basically destroy that round thing.”
“I know what a transformer is. It bumps the voltage up or down for a neighborhood, office building, or similar pull on the power grid.”
“Ooh, someone has Wikipedia.”
“Actually, Dan’s dad is an electrician and taught him that when he was like eight.”
“Um, nothing! Let’s break this thing, huh?”
Frankenstein ripped the fence apart and stomped at the transformer with all his might. It exploded in a shower of sparks and the jail went dark.
“Arrgh!” Frankenstein yelled. “Fire bad! Rarrr! Ha ha, just kidding.”
Inside, Kathryn realized they had made a slight miscalculation going into this little escapade. Of the three guards on duty at the moment, two of them were women. She tried using her feminine wiles anyway — you never know — but the female guards quickly got wise to her scheme.
“You can cut the crap now, lady,” said Sheila the Guard With a Full and Personalized Backstory. “I’ve got to finish an essay tonight since I’m attending college part time to get my degree and pursue my career goals and I don’t have any time for your nonsense.”
Just then, the lights went out. Carl ran in and crashed into Kathryn. He got up and shouted, “What are you doing? You’re supposed to be shaking your boobs at the guards!”
“Ixnay on the oobsbay!”
Before Kathryn could respond, three 20 million billion-candlepower flashlights were shining on their faces.
“Don’t move,” said– guess. Go on, guess.
Did you guess yet? Okay, let’s see if you’re right.
Said Louise, the other female guard. (Were you right? Good job!) “We’ve got tasers and guns and this job is super boring so we’ll light you up and post it on cooljailvids.net if you try anything.”
Louise covered them as Sheila and the unnamed male guard who doesn’t get any lines (take THAT, patriarchy!) put on the handcuffs. Mia and Frankenstein then burst in and all three guards pointed their guns at them.
“Aw, crap,” said Mia.
Dwayne perked up as Louise locked the rest of the Redressers in the cell and walked away. “Great! You came for me! So, what’s the plan?”
He looked from face to face. The others looked away.
“This is part of the plan, right?”
Nobody made eye contact for three weeks.
~ Five Months Later ~
Dwayne was led back to the cell. He was beaming. “Guys! I’m out! I’m going home!”
“What?” Mia asked. “How is that possible?”
“My trial ended. The judge let me off with five months, time served.”
“But you conspired to burn down your store and commit insurance fraud,” Carl said.
“Right,” Dwayne said as he picked up his couple of belongings. “White collar crime. Fraud is all money stuff and conspiracy is practically Wall Street! Good luck, everyone. Peace!”
“Wait,” Kathryn said. “Are you gonna come back to help us? Or hire some lawyers? Or anything?”
Dwayne grimaced. “Ah. Right. Well, the terms of my release bar me from having any contact with you guys, including providing legal aid.”
“So you’re saying you’re leaving and we’re stuck here for another ten months until our trial?” asked Frankenstein.
“Um, yes. Sorry about the whole inequality thing. I was talking to the judge and he was saying how you guys are in for property damage and attempted jailbreak and those are pretty lower class, so your trial isn’t that high a priority.”
“Time out,” Mia said. “You were just chilling out with the judge?”
“Oh. Yeah. White collar defendants get access to the lounge.”
Kathryn shook her head. “Courts have lounges?”
“Yeah. It’s like airports. Fraud and conspiracy are practically first class diamond club.”
He realized he sounded a little too exuberant. “I tried to get you in, but they wouldn’t let me,” he lied. “On the upside, a few months in jail is going to add a powerful new level of complexity and pathos to my seminars!”
Mia, Carl, Kathryn, and Frankenstein were stunned, mouths agape. “Well,” Dwayne said, “I guess this is goodbye.”
He started towards the exit as the unnamed male guard locked the cell.
“But you’ll come back for our trial, right?” Carl asked.
“Can’t hear you! Too far away! Sorry!”
They would never saw him again. They assumed. And so should you. Seriously, what a jerk.
I was polishing off my thirty-sixth bottle of Old Bastard whiskey when she knocked through the door. With it getting shot out twice a week, I’d started replacing the door’s glass with that cheap sugar glass they use in movies. I oughta put up a sign, I guess.
I must have been thinking about the glass for a while, because she’d stopped knocking out the glass and was leaning into my office and shouting obscenities. I waved her in and asked her to sit down while I opened another bottle of whiskey and took a sip.
“Whugh’gh a gai gugl gai guh guhgh igga guh gai lugh?” I asked. I swallowed and tried again. “What’s a nice girl like you doing in a dump like this?”
“Hang on,” she said. “I’ll be there in a minute.” She was having trouble turning the knob since she had hooks for hands. I gallantly offered to open it for her. I strode over to the door, tripped over a pile of whiskey bottles, hit my head on the corner of the desk, and woke up in the hospital.
“Whugh haghghegh?” I asked. I swallowed my whiskey and tried again. “What happened?”
“You’ve got a concussion. You’ve been out for days. We had to operate. Luckily, you didn’t have much blood in your whiskey system so we were able to skip the anesthesia.”
“Your voice sounds familiar. Do I know you?”
The doctor pulled her mask down with her hook. “You certainly know how to make a woman feel special.”
“Now that we’re alone and my thoughts occasionally deslizarse en español, what were you coming to see me about?”
She walked to my bed. “It’s my husband, Frank,” she said. “He’s imaginary and also a green llama.”
“Ah, yes. A classic case of this story being written by an idiot. Do you have any pictures of him?”
She leaned towards me, pressing her body against mine. I winced as her shoulder knocked against my head wound. “Not here. They’re all taped to the fridge at home.”
“I see. Alright, I’ll take the case. My fee is $9 a day plus expenses. And one other thing.”
“Yes, anything!” She took a deep breath and the hooks in her bosom scratched the inside of my nostrils.
“Can you…put a new whiskey bottle in my IV drip?”
Just then, the door flung open and shots rang out. It was her husband, Frank. His enormous gun was specially designed to be fired with a hoof or whatever llamas have. Are they ungulates? I made a mental note to look it up later as I bled out through the bullet holes and all the gouges in my face from the bosom hooks. I’m not sure what happened next because I was dead. I hate it when that happens.